The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.
First of all, the planners propose
to widen
the sidewalk on both sides of the road and Change the verb form
widening
add
bicycle lanes. Wrong verb form
adding
This
will mean reducing the number of lanes for cars and other vehicles. A pedestrian crossing will also
be installed at the lower end of the street, near the gas station. This
crossing will include an island in the middle where people can wait in safety.
In addition
to the safety measures above, planners also
want to plant trees along both sides of the road. These trees will transform the appearance of the neighbourhood as well as
provide vital extra shade for pedestrians.
To summarise, under these proposals, the needs of local residents will be better served by making Foster Road a safer and more pleasant environment.Submitted by mdelvega90 on
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