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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe boys and girls benefits more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in single-sex schools. Others,
however
, believe boys and girls
benefits
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 more from attending mixed schools. Each education system
have
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 advantages and disadvantages. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both.
Firstly
, most
of
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parents
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the parents
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 hope to their children will have good academic
achievement
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.
Therefore
, they believe that these institutions can help their children concentrate on their studies.
Moreover
, female students may be safer in
separate
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school
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schools
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. They are not teased or harassed. But one of the disadvantages, they can’t understand the
different
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 between the sexes and how to maintain
friendship
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 between the opposite sex.
On the other hand
, there
are
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quite
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reason
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 to send a child to
co-educational
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school
. They are aware of gender differences. They are lived in
a
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equal gender
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 environment.
In addition
, they
also
 learn how to cooperate and manipulate the advantages of different gender in common work. In conclusion, the choice of which
school
 depends on each person's opinion. In my opinion, I think that both boys and girls should be educated in one
school
. They can learn from each other.
Besides
, they could know the ways how to behave and
also
 respect their relationships.
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