The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works.

The diagram below describes the structure of a home smokery and how it works.
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The diagram illustrates how a home smokery is operated and structured.
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, the smokery comprises three parts, connected by pipes, beginning with a
chamber
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through which
air
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enters and ending with a
box
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in which the food is smoked.
First,
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air
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enters an underground
chamber
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. The entry of
air
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is controlled by opening and closing the lid of
this
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chamber
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. At the base, there is a
pipe
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which takes
air
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from the
chamber
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into a second underground
chamber
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, with a lid situated at ground level.
This
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contains logs, which are heated, producing
smoke
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. The
pipe
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at the base of
this
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chamber
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, allows heat and
smoke
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to pass to the final stage. The process of smoking the food takes place in the third and final
box
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or
chamber
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, about two-thirds of which is above ground level. The
box
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is an enclosed structure. Heat and
smoke
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enters
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through the
pipe
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at the base, passing through bricks which are placed on top of
this
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inlet
pipe
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. The heat and
smoke
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then
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rise to the top of the
box
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, where the meat or fish to be smoked is suspended and smoked.
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