Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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some people that spaces for wall
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ought to be permitted in cities
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others assert these kinds of actions should be inhibited. Graffiti may be beneficial for cities’
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to attract some tourists and many
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exhibition
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. Looking at
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case from the other side, it may be reasonable to prevent these actions because
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of
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may present unrelated works and
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leads to
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cities’
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.
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the one hand, allowing some areas to graffiti
artists
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may bring positive impacts to cities. They can demonstrate their works
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regions
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as ruined or abandoned towns and they contribute to these places may be appealing again
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citizens.
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, some old facilities
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as old factory yards may be devoted
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their talents.
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, some competitions can be held in order to revive
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region and tourists can be attracted.
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, either city dwellers and
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can obtain some profits
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these applications and events.
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the other hand, banning these kinds of actions may be logical in terms of
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aspect
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many graffiti
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show good works, a space or a region
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they gather to reflect their different artistic
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may be impacted negatively because of unrelated drawing
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depictions can be happened.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban art
  • vandalism
  • vibrancy
  • aesthetic
  • decline
  • creative expression
  • cultural asset
  • legal ramifications
  • marginalized groups
  • community engagement
  • ethical considerations
  • gentrification
  • zoning regulations
  • public space
  • civic responsibility
  • curated walls
  • street artists
  • social commentary
  • property rights
  • anti-graffiti coatings
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