Are higher taxes or lower taxes better for society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is an indisputable
fact
that taxes
have some merits and demerits for the population
. The amount
of tax
is debatable which become a sensitive topic in this
recent day
. I personally believe that lower Fix the agreement mistake
days
tax
is more advisable than higher taxes
due to
economic
level of Correct article usage
the economic
the
Correct article usage
apply
society
and the government
’s wrongdoings
.
To commence with, there are people
who can not afford to pay the government
’s fee due to
low economic status
. In fact
, there are people
who unemployed
and can not even attain several basic needs, Add a missing verb
are unemployed
such
as clothes and food. Taxes
will be a burden for poor people
which
exploit their Correct pronoun usage
who
life
. To illustrate this
, if the commisions
had increased, Correct your spelling
commissions
population
would not afford to payAdd an article
the population
,
and Remove the comma
apply
Correct pronoun usage
this impacts
impacts
Wrong verb form
impacted
on
the higher percentage of homeless and unemployment.
Another point to consider is the Change preposition
apply
amount
of fee
that have Fix the agreement mistake
fees
poor
correlation with the development Correct article usage
a poor
for
the Change preposition
of
country
. Higher taxes
do not mean to be
a better Change the verb form
being
country
. While
the higher taxes
should people
pay, the national authorities sometimes do their wrongdoings
, such
as corruptions
and unwanted expenses. Fix the agreement mistake
corruption
This
also
create
disbelief Change the verb form
creates
from
Change preposition
in
the
Correct article usage
apply
society
, which impacts
on
low Change preposition
apply
adherence
to pay commisions
and Correct your spelling
commissions
betray
their nation Wrong verb form
betraying
by
wars. Change preposition
through
For instance
, many Indonesians
Minister corrupt the money from their individual needs, which Replace the word
Indonesian
make
Indonesians reduce their Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
adherence
about
Change preposition
to
taxes
.
To sum up
, lower taxes
better
for Add a missing verb
are better
society
due to
economic
Correct article usage
the economic
status
on
individuals and the wrong actions Change preposition
of
from
the Change preposition
of
government
. The government
should consider the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
commisions
before Correct your spelling
commissions
implement
Change the verb form
implementing
it
in the real Correct pronoun usage
them
life
.
It is an indisputable fact
that taxes
have some merits and demerits for the population
. The amount
of tax
is debatable which become a sensitive topic in this
recent day
. I personally believe that lower Fix the agreement mistake
days
tax
is more advisable than higher taxes
due to
the economic level of society
and the government
’s wrongdoings
.
To commence with, there are people
who can not afford to pay the government
’s fee due to
low economic status
. In fact
, there are people
who are unemployed and can not even attain several basic needs, such
as clothes and food. Taxes
will be a burden for poor people
who exploit their life
. To illustrate this
, if the commissions had increased, population
would not afford to pay and Add an article
the population
impacts
the
higher percentage of homeless and unemployment.
Another point to consider is the number of fees that have a poor correlation with the development of the Correct article usage
a
country
. Higher taxes
do not mean being a better country
. While
the higher taxes
should people
pay, the national authorities sometimes do wrongdoings
, such
as corruption and unwanted expenses. This
also
creates disbelief from
Change preposition
in
the
Correct article usage
apply
society
, which impacts
on
low Change preposition
apply
adherence
to paying commissions and betraying their nation through wars. For instance
, many Minister
of Indonesia corrupt the money from their individual needs, which makes Indonesians reduce their Fix the agreement mistake
ministers
adherence
to taxes
.
To sum up
, lower taxes
are better for society
due to
the economic status
of individuals and the wrong actions from
the Change preposition
of
government
. The government
should consider the amount
of commissions before implementing it in the real Change the quantifier
number
life
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