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The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map depicts the modification of the Biology School in a university from the present to the future.
Overall
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, the
area
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 had a dramatic renovation, most notably the
area
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 in the
bottom
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 right-hand corner.
Furthermore
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, the
area
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 on the top
also
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 has significant changes. The pine tree
area
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 which is in the
bottom
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 left-hand corner will be replaced by the car park
area
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 for staff.
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the teaching building and lecture room will be divided into 2 parts which are close to the car park and above the IT centre respectively. The IT centre will be expanded and relocated to the
bottom
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 right-hand corner. There is a large pine tree
area
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 at the
bottom
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 of the present plan,
then
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 will be removed and a lab and office will be added in the middle of the tree
area
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.
Moreover
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, the drama theatre will be replaced by a music centre.
Lastly
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, the Cafe, Central Library and Indoor sports hall have remained unchanged.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, bottom with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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