The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map depicts the modification of the Biology School in a university from the present to the future.
Overall
, the Linking Words
area
had a dramatic renovation, most notably the Use synonyms
area
in the Use synonyms
bottom
right-hand corner. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
area
on the top Use synonyms
also
has significant changes.
The pine tree Linking Words
area
which is in the Use synonyms
bottom
left-hand corner will be replaced by the car park Use synonyms
area
for staff. Use synonyms
Next,
the teaching building and lecture room will be divided into 2 parts which are close to the car park and above the IT centre respectively. The IT centre will be expanded and relocated to the Linking Words
bottom
right-hand corner.
There is a large pine tree Use synonyms
area
at the Use synonyms
bottom
of the present plan, Use synonyms
then
will be removed and a lab and office will be added in the middle of the tree Linking Words
area
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the drama theatre will be replaced by a music centre. Linking Words
Lastly
, the Cafe, Central Library and Indoor sports hall have remained unchanged.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, bottom with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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