The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in particular university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map depicts the modification of the Biology School in a university from the present to the future.
Overall
, the area
had a dramatic renovation, most notably the area
in the bottom
right-hand corner. Furthermore
, the area
on the top also
has significant changes.
The pine tree area
which is in the bottom
left-hand corner will be replaced by the car park area
for staff. Next,
the teaching building and lecture room will be divided into 2 parts which are close to the car park and above the IT centre respectively. The IT centre will be expanded and relocated to the bottom
right-hand corner.
There is a large pine tree area
at the bottom
of the present plan, then
will be removed and a lab and office will be added in the middle of the tree area
. Moreover
, the drama theatre will be replaced by a music centre. Lastly
, the Cafe, Central Library and Indoor sports hall have remained unchanged.Submitted by linhpg259 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, bottom with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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