the diagram below shows the manufacturing process of making sugar from sugar cane. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustration highlights data about the steps of making Linking Words
sugar
.There are 7 stages in the process, starting with growing Use synonyms
sugar
cane and ending up with drying and cooling it.
The first stage is that Use synonyms
sugar
cane Use synonyms
are
grown at approximately 12 until 18 months. Change the verb form
is
Following
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this
, having been grown over the period, the Linking Words
sugar
cane Use synonyms
are
cut down and harvested by people. Change the verb form
is
Then
, a special tractor is picked up and put Linking Words
it
into a box. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Subsequently
, after being crushed by a special machine, the Linking Words
sugar
canes Use synonyms
are produced
Change the verb form
have produced
a
juice.
In the next stage, Correct your spelling
as
this
juice is purified into a limestone filter, after which is heated by an evaporator to create syrup into juice. Linking Words
Finally
, when a Linking Words
seperates
Correct your spelling
separate
sugar
has been Use synonyms
crystaised
from Correct your spelling
crystalised
a
syrup by centrifuge, Remove the article
apply
then
the Linking Words
sugar
is Use synonyms
under went
to a metal box and it is dried and cooled there. Correct your spelling
underwent
This
completes the process of making Linking Words
sugar
.Use synonyms
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