Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. What impact does it have on the environmental and people? Who lost their jobs because of it?

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modern

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an increasing number of more and more humans believe that online shopping is too well-known.

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reason

, it is making a good effect on individualsʼ life with its convenience and simplicity . Yet,

this

tendency has

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impact on the surrounding world ,

as well as

on the occupation market .

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is the

reason

, many employees can lose their profession . First and foremost, one of the main

advantage

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is that there are many merits of more individuals

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that online stores

an

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increasing day by day .

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is the

reason

, as l mentioned above it is extremely convenience and

simplicity

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. In recent years everyone wants to buy something from

this

kind of

shops

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.

Also

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it helps to reduce time .

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likes

this

aspect .

For instance

, you spend 2 hours going to the shop and buying clothes .

However

, online shopping takes at most half an hour.

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proof of our point .

On the other hand

, moving it should be noted that everything has its merits and demerits .

For

this

reason

, it has some drawbacks . From my point of view ,

this

way is a bit harmful

for

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workers .

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is the

reason

, if

this

method becomes widespread , individuals will lose their jobs .

Moreover

, there may be various demonstrations against unemployment in the streets .

In addition

, it will become a big scandal not only for the unemployed but

also

for the government.

For

this

reason

, it is better to have a standard for everything. By way of my conclusion, l once again reaffirm my position that the increase in online stores is

also

good . Yet , do not forget the traditional markets .