Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. What impact does it have on the environmental and people? Who lost their jobs because of it?

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an increasing number of more and more humans believe that online shopping is too well-known.

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, it is making a good effect on individualsʼ life with its convenience and simplicity . Yet,

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impact on the surrounding world ,

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on the occupation market .

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, many employees can lose their profession . First and foremost, one of the main

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is that there are many merits of more individuals

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that online stores

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increasing day by day .

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, as l mentioned above it is extremely convenience and

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. In recent years everyone wants to buy something from

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it helps to reduce time .

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likes

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, you spend 2 hours going to the shop and buying clothes .

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, online shopping takes at most half an hour.

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proof of our point .

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, moving it should be noted that everything has its merits and demerits .

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, it has some drawbacks . From my point of view ,

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workers .

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, if

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method becomes widespread , individuals will lose their jobs .

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, there may be various demonstrations against unemployment in the streets .

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for the government.

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, it is better to have a standard for everything. By way of my conclusion, l once again reaffirm my position that the increase in online stores is

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good . Yet , do not forget the traditional markets .