THE CHARTS SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF PEOPLE WORKING INDIFFERENT SECTORS IN TOWNS A AND B IN TWO YEARS, 1960 AND 2010

THE CHARTS SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF PEOPLE WORKING INDIFFERENT SECTORS IN TOWNS A AND B IN TWO YEARS, 1960 AND 2010
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The charts provide proportions of
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A and
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B workers that retained either manufacturing, sales, or services work positions in 1960 and 2010.
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, it can be noticed that, in
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A, the only category that didn't experience a decrease was the manufacturing one, which increased,
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.
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, in
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B, only the sales branch differed from the improvement of the other two fields. Regarding
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A, the most notable change was the enormous growth of the proportion of people working in manufacturing, which, from being the smallest segment in 1960, became the most popular work position in 2010 at 64%. The other two fields experienced a fall that approximately halve them. About
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B, it experienced some changes, too, starting with the sales branch accounting for almost the entire total in 1960 and
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decreasing its percentages by 17%. Noteworthy, manufacturing employees more than doubled, going from only 10% in 1960 to making up a fourth of the total in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • dominant sector
  • proportion
  • employment sectors
  • distribution
  • shifts
  • trends
  • growth
  • decline
  • main sector
  • 50-year period
  • comparison focus
  • analyze
  • summarize
  • changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • evolution
  • observed
  • highlight
  • underlie
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