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Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizer and better machinery. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your opinion.

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nowadays,
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 the increased quality of infrastructure, the
products
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 of foods are cheaper than in the past because the farmers used better fertilizers and tools.
this
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 happens to have several merits and some drawbacks. in
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 essay, I will want to discuss both sides of them. on the one hand, there are those who subscribe that there are several merits when
people
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 are able to buy cheaper
products
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. they insist that, if food
products
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 have low prices, the number of
people
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 willing to buy them increases rapidly.
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, the statistics of hunger and poverty decline significantly in the long run. so, there are highly beneficial for Low-income
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. from a social perspective, it is a decisive factor in a rise high standard of living.
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, from an economical standpoint, if the price of production of foods downwards, there will be several businessmen willing to export these types of
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.
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,
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 is able to be a reliable source of income for each administration.
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, many commentators justifiably argue that there are some disadvantages to producing much more cheaply. from
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 point of view, the quality of these type of foods are less than past so, it can be a threat to the health of
people
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 in the long period. they believe farmers don't attention to the quality of them and they just want to produce cheaper food.
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, I don't find
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 argument valid because governments should Supervision and care in process of
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. in conclusion,
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 there are some disadvantages , the positive points of them are noticeable.
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