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Some children spend hours on their smartphones today. why is this the case? is this positive or negative development?

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These days technology greatly influences people's lives and it is noticed that juveniles consume most of their time playing on electronic devices. I think it is
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 the busy schedule of
parents
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 and the attractiveness of these gadgets.
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,
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 me, it negatively impacts kids because it affects their health and they become stubborn.
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 with, the reason behind
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 situation is the burden of workload on
parents
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 as they go to their jobs to earn bread and butter for their family. But unfortunately, when they come back from the work they feel very exhausted and
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 of giving time to their
children
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, they hand over the devices
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 as mobiles and tablets, and laptops for playing. They find it intriguing and feel pleasure to explore the new feature.
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, it is a busy lifestyle and no one has time for anyone even
parents
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 are becoming a machine for earning money only they left their
children
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 alone that's why they are addicted to
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 types of gadgets.
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, it hurts
children
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's health because they are sticking to the devices that affect their eyesight first
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, they got headaches and body aches too.
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 of these, the kids become aggressive and are unable to pay full attention to other activities, especially their studies.
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, they do not indulge their selves in any other physical activity and got stuck in one place, and become obese which is alarming because it is the leading cause of many other diseases.
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, a recent survey by the university of Canada states that most kids are suffering from diabetes and
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 is just because of a lack of movement. In conclusion,
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 it's very hard for
parents
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 to make a balance between work and family it is not impossible if they do little work on it they can able to save their
children
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's life from getting worst. They must give attention to their
children
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 to make them a well-mannered person.
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, arrange some other physical activities for them like swimming, and other grounds games so they remain physically fit and healthy.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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