Some people believe that air travel should be restricated because it causes air pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years,

air

travel

, one of the luxurious

mode

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modes

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of

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transportation, is in demand among

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travelers

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travellers

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. Many interested people often

travel

by

plane

for

their

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professional and private reasons. Some folks believe that

plane

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planes

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cause

pollution

in the

air

. In my opinion,

Although

, more

flight

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flights

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in the

sky

cause

pollution

,

Moreover

, we

also

consider the facilities provided by the

plane

. One of the primary reasons

of

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air

pollution

is more

number

of

airplane

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aeroplane

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travel

in the

sky

.

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,

due to

increasing

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the increasing

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number

of

travelers

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travellers

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, the owner of

air

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an air

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travel

agency increases the

number

of

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the plane

a plane

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plane

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planes

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for their customers.

As a result

, I believe,

this

can be harmful to the environment of the earth.

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, if more planes

are

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travel

in the

sky

, it would be

problem

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a problem

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in

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the ozone layer of the

sky

.

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, the life of

earth

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the earth

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will decrease day by day. Another problem of

air

pollution

is

effect

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the effect

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on birds.

Due to

bad

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the bad

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atmosphere, birds cannot

travel

to their destination for their needs.

Finally

, the best solution would be

kept

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low

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a low

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number

of

air

travel

by

air

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the air

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agency

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agencies

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. It means, if

air

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the air

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department

reduce

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the

number

of

the

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planes

then

it is good for

environment

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the environment

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.

Additionally

, we

also

need to consider the facilities provided by

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air

travel

.

Air

Travel

is one of the most convenient

travel

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for people.

For example

, individuals can

travel

to another country in

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less time.

Moreover

, they

also

provide better security to all visitors. In conclusion,

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travel

become

more

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a more

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useful

mose

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mode

of transportation

among

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in

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the community. I think, travelling by

plane

is not good for

environment

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the environment

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because it causes

harmful

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harm

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to

sky

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the sky

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, despite

this

, it is

also

providing better facilities to everyone.