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Some argue that it is beneficial to share as much information as possible, while others believe that some information should be kept confidential. I think the issue has two sides, positive and negative

#argue #information #two
Sharing
information
 freely can lead to many benefits in
education
, health or business. Open sharing of data and results can lead to faster progress and the development of technologies in
education
 and work. An example of
this
 is the sharing of
information
 in
education
 that leads to more efficient and effective actions and learning,
such
 as online
education
, which has become popular and important. In business, sharing
information
 can lead to increased collaboration and the development of new and innovative products. In the field of health, it makes society more aware of taking care of their health.
On the other hand
, some argue that certain
information
 should be kept confidential.
becouse
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because
 sharing
information
certain
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 data could lead to the exploitation of vulnerable populations.or sharing certain
information
 could cause
the
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 loss of competitive advantage. could induce plagiarism. In my opinion, it would be beneficial if people receive
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information
 that might affect their lives and not be harmful to society. a balance needs to be struck between sharing
information
 freely and keeping certain
information
 confidential. It is important to share
information
 that can lead to progress and innovation,
while
also
 protecting sensitive
information
 that could bring on harm.
Additionally
, a proper ethical framework needs to be in place to ensure that the sharing of
information
 is done in a responsible and ethical manner.
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