You have seen an advertisement in Australian magazines for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child write a letter # Explain why you would like this # Give detail of why you are a suitable person to employ # Say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam

This

is to express my interest in the opening babysitter in hello friend magazine dated march 2022. You have mentioned in your advertisement to look after your six-month-old baby

along with

the six-year-old child. I am very much interested in

this

job as I adore kids and love to spend time with them . I have 1 year of babysitting experience in the UK . I had done babysitting with an 8-month baby for four months in Norwich . I was taking care of him and responsible for his daily routine completion

as well as

his food .,

Moreover

I like to work as a babysitter as I really like to take care of toddlers and kids.

Furthermore

, I am excited to travel to Australia for six months . As

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will explore Australia in my free time. I will spend time exploring city life in Sydney, Melbourne and Perth. looking forward to a quick reply . Yours faithfully Steve johnson

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