You have seen an advertisement in Australian magazines for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child write a letter # Explain why you would like this # Give detail of why you are a suitable person to employ # Say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam

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is to express my interest in the opening babysitter in hello friend magazine dated march 2022. You have mentioned in your advertisement to look after your six-month-old baby

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the six-year-old child. I am very much interested in

this

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job as I adore kids and love to spend time with them . I have 1 year of babysitting experience in the UK . I had done babysitting with an 8-month baby for four months in Norwich . I was taking care of him and responsible for his daily routine completion

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his food .,

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I like to work as a babysitter as I really like to take care of toddlers and kids.

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, I am excited to travel to Australia for six months . As

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will explore Australia in my free time. I will spend time exploring city life in Sydney, Melbourne and Perth. looking forward to a quick reply . Yours faithfully Steve johnson

yash334Fri Mar 24 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

164 words

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