some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

i

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agree with the viewpoint that

music

is a good approach to

combination

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of various cultures and ages together. first,like the

arts

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work,

music

is a

mean

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of

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what

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composers and

performancers

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performances

performers

to

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apply

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express their creations,

enmotions

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emotions

and the experience of their

lifes

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lives

,

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when

audience

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the audience

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listening

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the

muisc

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music

they could generate resonance with the creators which maybe they have some identical points or feelings,it’s like a mental bridge that could connect people’s heart,in there,no matter where you come from,what ages you are,everyone can communicate with each other in the field that

music

bring

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in.

secondly

,the diversity of

music

indicate

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indicates

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the different cultures of

creator’s

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the creator’s

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backgound

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background

,

while

some times

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sometimes

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the

inspriation

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inspiration

of the

music

comes from other countries,

for example

,the famous musician

debussy

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Debussy

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,his orchestral

muisc

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music

sea which consist of three

chapter

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chapters

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,

its

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it's

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insprated

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inspired

inspected

from

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katsushika

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hokusai

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a master of

ukiyoe

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ukiyo-e

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painting,it

implys

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implies

the interact of arts,there

have

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no boundary,we could make the

culture

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cultural

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fusion.

finally

,

i

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think

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cultivate

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cultivating

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someone’s

interesting

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interest

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such

as

music

,

arts

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is very imperative,

cause

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because

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it will significantly broaden your

knowlege

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knowledge

,let you discover different cultures and apply it

into

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your work

maybe

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may be

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,

then

your perspective,mind and imagination will be more profound.