Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some
people
believe that growing and planting trees
in cities and towns are
more important than constructing more housing accommodation. I partially agree with Correct subject-verb agreement
is
this
opinion for several reasons.
On the one hand, planting trees
is important. Because of this
trees
and plants provide fresh air
and a fresh environment with healthy nutrients. In recent years, the air
getting more harmful caused of cars and factories. Additionally
, young and old people
are suffering from health diseases because of air
pollution . If people
plant more trees
in order to get healthy nutrients from fresh air
, they might solve the air
pollution problem. Secondly
, if open spaces plant more trees
and grasses which give a beautiful and spectacular view, it could easily affect the community and tourism. The number of tourists might increase significantly.
On the other hand
, there are several disadvantages. Firstly
, the number of people
is increasing day by day. Local governments might face problems such
as housing shortages in the near future. Secondly
, I could take people
who live in rural areas as an example they migrate to cities or towns. I think that the local government ought to build more housing accommodations in order to provide living space for people
living in villages.
In conclusion, in my opinion, both planting trees
and constructing housing accommodations have the same amount of importance.Submitted by moxinurabjalilova on
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Provide a clearer position on the argument and support it throughout the essay.
coherence cohesion
Improve the organization of ideas and use linking words to enhance coherence and cohesion.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite