Some people think that countryside life is healthier while others believe that city is better in order to have a healthy lifestyle. Discuss both views with your own perception.

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A group of
people
argue that living in suburban
areas
are most healthy compared to
city
life
while
others consider that
city
life
is more beneficial for human health. In
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I will discuss both points of view and give my own opinion as well. On one hand, in today's
life
most
people
trying to live in a
city
and because of that population in towns is increasing dramatically which will cause some environmental problems as well health problems.
Firstly
, in urban
areas
air pollution is a big issue because of that most
people
can not breathe clean air.
Secondly
, in ,cities most
people
do not care about their surroundings everyone throw away garbage everywhere they want and because of that some disease will affect humanity.
For instance
, malaria is
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best example which is caused because of the dirty places and some garbage around the
city
.
On the other hand
, urban
areas
are more developed compared to suburbs there are more facilities and technological developments which will assist
people
to live more healthily compared to urban
areas
.
For example
, in cities everywhere you can access a hospital which is so hard to find in village
life
.
Moreover
, transportation is another pro of
city
life
which
is
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helping
people
to move from one area to another area
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for example
ambulance will help
people
to reach the hospital on time.
Overall
, each area has their own positive and negative impact on human health but in my opinion
city
life
is healthier compared to village
life
because you can easily access
to
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hospitals, doctors, and pharmacies whenever you want.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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