Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school. Do you think the benefits of home-schooling outweigh its drawbacks?

The parents think they should give more attention rather than a

school

because under the campus teacher pay less concentration to

a particular students

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a particular student

particular students

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. Some parents believe on

school

is better for their

son

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sons

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to make new friends and learn new activities with classmates. I agree with the statement about sending their

kids

to

school

for a better future. First and foremost claim that

kids

are

a

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in a

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limited comfort zone whenever they are going outside for a limited time after that they become irritated. For ,example one child spend two years at the

home

at the time of lockdown

however

after the lockdown

lack

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confidence to talk to someone else. It is a drawback of spending quality days

in

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at

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the

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apply

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home

. So we are developing their

kids

for

an outside games

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outside games

an outside game

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like daily going for ground sports and

maintain

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maintaining

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social distance games activities for boosting their physical and mind thinking.

Secondly

, the children are going to

school

to study

then

they enhance new skills and confidence to speak with another person.

In addition

, under the competition game with

comparison

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a comparison

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between

home

or

school

children which one is better for physical activity

then

result

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results

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as outgoing students are well than

homestay

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a homestay

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.

Therefore

, all the families are sending their babies to study so they are

well mannered

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well-mannered

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and develop their thinking abilities and improve their routine life with fitness.

On the contrary

, the parents believe with both schools help them for coordinating with other people and learn new things and at

home

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,home

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kids

lack confidence with other people and have lots of limitations outside the

home

.