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Many teachers assign homework to students everyday. Dou you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your anwser.

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There have been various opinions on whether students should be assigned homework or not. There may be advantages and disadvantages to
this
 discussion which we will explore
further
 in
this
 essay. Students spend a significant amount of time at
school
 every day, the main purpose is to make them academically strong and in the presence of a tutor who knows that the assignment is done by that specific student. The rest of the day can be spent with family and social activities which becomes difficult if they have to contribute time to education after
school
also
. It has
also
 been observed that sometimes parents help their children with their work which is unknown to teachers.
However
, it is
also
 true that homework makes them feel responsible because they are answerable to their teachers. And if there is any topic they are unable to understand, can be discussed with their parents which
also
 creates a good work relationship with them. Things studied at
school
 will be revised and they are better able to comprehend what they have studied at
school
. In conclusion, I feel light homework should be assigned and that too only 1-3 days a week. So that the student enjoys it and looks forward to more activities alongside
this
. As long as Student does not feel education/
academicare
Correct your spelling
academic are
academic
a burden in their day-to-day routine.
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