You have seen an advertisement in Australian magazines for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child write a letter # Explain why you would like this # Give detail of why you are a suitable person to employ # Say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir, I am writing to you with regards to an advertisement for looking after your six-year child. First and foremost, I am Anne, living in Park Avenue, Sydney near your home. I did a course in childcare
last
year. The main reason behind my interest is that I am looking for a job because my previous family moved to another state and
due to
that I have to leave that
work
. Moving on, I find myself suitable for
this
work
because I
also
did training in
this
field
also
have
work
experience. I know how to behave with children and about their diet. I gained
this
knowledge through a 3-year course.
Moreover
, I
also
have references from my previous family where I was working
work
.
Finally
, whenever I get free time during the weekends at that time I went to the childcare centre situated in the centre of the city and spent time with the children. Well, I found
this
work
very interesting, if you find me suitable for
this
work
and required any
further
information please contact me. My email id is [email protected]. I am looking forward to hearing from you . Yours sincerely, Sauna
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