you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. you think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter - say why he/she would not enjoy going to college - explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her - suggest rypes of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear Hana, I'm so glad to read your letter and I appreciate that you opted me for giving some pieces of advice about your decision. As far as I know, you don't believe in an education degree and haven't sufficient time to study,
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going to college isn't fantastic for you. As though, you need more money for covering your expenses in life, so choosing a job is excellent for you. Personally, I think that you have a good talent for business. you are so active, sociable and motivated for earning money.
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, I see that you follow economical subjects and analyse the changes.
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all of these factors, choosing a suitable job is more logical than going to college for you.
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, I recommend you choose a sales career. You are able to communicate with people and have good confidence.
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, as I said, you are keen on earning money and finding the best opportunities to progress in finance.
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, opting sales field as a career and ignoring college will be beneficial for you. I waiting for your reply soon. Best Regards, Hossein
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • vocational
  • apprenticeship
  • hands-on learning
  • practical skills
  • specific career
  • student loan debt
  • immediate practical experience
  • gain work experience
  • enter the workforce
  • job prospects
  • financial stability
  • career advancement
  • entrepreneurship
  • freelancing
  • part-time job
  • self-employment
  • trade school
  • technical college
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