The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical applianices and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feafures, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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Two line graphs represent/demonstrate the proportion of families equipped with domestic appliances and the time they spent on housework in a specific nation over a period of almost a century.
Over all
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Overall
it is clear that
the ownership of electrical appliances saw an upward trend over the period shown. Additionally
, as for the average hours
allocated for housework every/per week, the figure decreased significantly from 1920 to 1960, ending at an unexpectedly negligible amount in 2019.
In terms of the percentage of houses equipped by
electronic devices, it is worth mentioning that the proportion of families with refrigerators in their houses increased dramatically from 1920 to 1969, peaking at 100% in 1980. Change preposition
with
Similarly
, a continuous increment can also
be seen in the figure for households with vacuum cleaners, which reached 100% 20 years later. Besides
, even though the percentage of washing machines did not increase continuously, more than 70% of homes were equipped with one (at least) in 2019.
Turning to the time distributed to household chores, between 1920 and 1960, the number of hours
spent on housework plunged remarkably, from 50 hours
to 20 hours
. Since then
, the figure has seen a slight decline, with the range of variation within 10 hours
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