Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about
the
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experiments on animals for medical care or how safe other products are.
While
some of them believe that
this
trend should be banned because it is morally wrong, I think a limited amount of animal
experimentations
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should be considered. On the one
hand
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supporters argue that by
this
practice the effectiveness of
deseases
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diseases
would be measured. A good example is
labratory
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laboratory
mice and rats in which we are able
testing
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new drugs on them to figure out if they work or not. So that they believe that
use
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of animals in medical research would be justified
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result of the recovery of a person
in
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the same sex.
Although
this
is useful, I personally agree with the banning of animal testing for non-medical products.
On the other hand
, opponents have the opinion that there are many ethical
argumentens
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arguments
against
this
view.
In other words
, they think
this
action will
causes
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animal suffering during the examination . Eventually, it is
object
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to do
this
just for our
benefits
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and not respect other
creature's
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lives.
For example
, during some surgeries on rats , they must open their eyes and
then
they will have a tough annoying pain
that is
unfair. The main conclusion to be drawn from
this
discussion as my own decision is that the best way is to test animals only for vital medical research and
attempting
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to find other alternative therapies.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ethics
  • Morality
  • Vivisection
  • In vivo testing
  • Cruelty-free
  • Animal welfare
  • Biomedical research
  • Toxicology
  • Sentience
  • Compassionate
  • Humane
  • Speciesism
  • In vitro
  • Alternative methods
  • Pharmacology
  • Clinical trials
  • Bioethics
  • Animal rights
  • Pain threshold
  • Efficacy
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