Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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At present, whilst opponents hold the view that the biggest global issue of our recent society is mainly the diminishing of especially
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of flesh-coloured, proponents have another perspective. I am of the belief that no life
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forests and creatures
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they play a vital role to
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stabilize
the balance of
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. On the one hand, there is no doubt that living
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earth
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cannot be without plants and animals because
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they
have many advantages to make the world
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comfortable
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place to live in. To illustrate, if
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the proportion
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of creatures
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as trees or fish
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, it will happen confusion in
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system, and maybe the planet will be not appropriate
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in.
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,
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deforestation
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considered
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cutting trees
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percentage
of Oxygen in the world.
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, what can be said
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maintaing
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maintaining
on environmental wildness is essential, and authorities have to monitor
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the
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rare type
that may be extinct?
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, despite the fact that all
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that
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exist
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, others believe that there are other factors that have
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impact on the environment.
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, many
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scientists
support that global warming is the largest problem, and governments should be
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awareness
towards
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dilema
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dilemma
.
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, changing
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climate has a detrimental effect on crops, and there are many
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species
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which have become difficult to grow. Eventually, not only does high temperature play a prominent key to alter the
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weather
water
, but
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polution
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pollution
that
result
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people has the same impact. In conclusion,
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essay has manifested the point mentioned above it can be reiterated that crops and wild animals are vital
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elements
to survive the place, others have thought of other factors. I argue the international community to be more careful with all creatures
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existence around us.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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