The table and graph below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table and graph below show information about cinema visits in Auckland between 1995 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table compares the proportion of audiences and the average number of visitors per year to cinemas in Auckland from 1995 to 2003. And the line graph shows
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the information
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on specific age groups of
Cinema
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visitors during the same period.
It is clear that
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over two-thirds of
Auckland
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residents went to the
cinema
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over the period shown, and that they usually saw films in cinemas around 10 times annually.
In addition
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, another trend can be seen, that the younger the generation, the more often they go to the
cinema
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.
According to
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the table, the percentage of Aucklanders visiting cinemas rose steadily from 67%
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1995, peaking at 80% in 2001, and
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fell to 72% in 2003. The average number of visits once increased between 1995 and 1997,
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, a dramatic decrease of about four can be seen after that. 2001 saw the figure rise again to over eight, but it was still much lower compared to earlier figures. Looking at the average number of visits by age group, people between 14 and 24 years old made the most
cinema
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visits in the years mentioned, with more than 10.
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, people aged over 50 went to the
cinema
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the least frequently.
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