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University only requires to apply digital media rather than continuously upgrading textbook. Agree or disagree.

#university #media #textbook
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 the past.
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Because
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 use of digital
media
 rather than manual.So digital
media
 is becoming an essential method at
this
time
.For
this
 university to try to obtain it. There are pros and cons to using digital
media
 at college.The essential reasons
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time
 and the
student
 can return back to the lesson at any
time
,at home,in the car or in any place which suitable for him/her.But the disadvantage
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 the
media
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.
on the other hand
,the healthy side for the
student
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 manual,the
student
 must go to university every day to study and they
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this
 case,they are losing much information. In conclusion,the two methods suitable for teaching are digital or manual at present and the
student
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 any suitable own.
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