some people think physical activity should be added as a part of the school curriculum, while others say it is not necessary. discuss both views and give your opinion

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their nation. Several
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that physical movement
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to be
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a part of schooling,
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others appeal that it is not mandatory. In my opinion,
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support
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the former group.
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the suggestions of both groups and will provide a logical conclusion. There are several benefits of adding physical activity
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curriculum
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. Primarily, education is only for the development of our knowledge. Students with only wisdom are not going to be stronger in
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future. They should do something
additionally
to be healthy.
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research in India shows that
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of the
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who are suffering from illness
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to the
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group.
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,
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the teacher
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teacher
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should indulge students in doing some sort of outdoor activities
such
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.
Therefore
, by
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they can able to be more active in every
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.
However
, there are some points that
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it
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not necessary.
Firstly
, it will provoke
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attention deficit hyperactive disorder, a psychological condition that
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mainly the toddlers which in turn
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them aggressive. perhaps, it may harmful
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other participants.
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need some rest,
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of tad nap
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to regain their stamina.
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what the teacher teaching. In some cases, it
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different that the student
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entangled with the situation they had and
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on curious towards
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it which can dull their performance in studies.
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them
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time for play. In a nutshell,
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child play, it is mandatory
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them to have a break.
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their concentration, thinking,
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and
also
to improve
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their health.
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