The maps bellow show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for its development.
The
maps
illustrates the centre of a small area Fix the agreement mistake
map
that is
name Islip as it is now,
and projects for its future condition.
Remove the comma
apply
Overall
, it can be seen that nowadays the town centre have
six Correct subject-verb agreement
has
areas
then
the city
plan is expande
for the reason Correct your spelling
expanding
figures
reach eleven. The pictures Correct article usage
the figures
are demonstrate
Change the verb form
demonstrate
present
time it is a small but next time Correct article usage
the present
is enlarge
and complex.
On the one hand, Change the verb form
is enlarged
future
plan will enlarge Add an article
the future
areas
, now the city
involve
six Change the verb form
involves
areas
but next
stage will be eleven Correct article usage
the next
areas
namely bus
station, shopping centre, car Correct article usage
the bus
park
, housing and pedestrian area. The countryside will divide four
and create Change preposition
into four
new
Add an article
a new
building
. Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
Moreover
the main Add a comma
,Moreover
road
has demolished
and Add a missing verb
been demolished
make
Wrong verb form
made
pedestrian
area. The main Correct article usage
a pedestrian
road
will extend so change location to around of city
. The school and the Add an article
the city
park
location are south of the town also
, creating new housing near to
the Change preposition
apply
park
.
On the other hand
, present
time the Change preposition
at present
city
have
shops, Change the verb form
has
main
Correct article usage
a main
road
, school
,and Correct article usage
a school
park
. In the meantime the Correct article usage
a park
road
unuseful
for walking people. Add a missing verb
is unuseful
However
the countryside Add a comma
,However
have
Change the verb form
has
large
Correct article usage
a large
hectar
so that condition must be Correct your spelling
hectare
using
.Wrong verb form
used
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