The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
These charts depict information on the average daily Highest and lowest temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average figure of
days
with rainfall for two cities in Australia each month. It's clear from the graphs that the minimum degree reached in
Canberra
while
the most
days
with rain in
Brisbane
.
According to
what is shown, the lowest temperature in
Canberra
was recorded at lower than 1C in July.
While
the lowest temperature in
Brisbane
represents at 10 degrees in August. There is a huge difference between temperatures in
Brisbane
and
Canberra
. The maximum degree in
Brisbane
was recorded at 30C
Also
we can see the highest degree in
Canberra
shows at about 26 degrees.
Moreover
, in the bar
chart
Add a comma
,chart
show examples
we can see the city that has the highest average of rain is
Brisbane
which
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
reached 14
days
. There's not that vast gap between these cities in the average number of
days
with precipitation. So we can see in
Canberra
almost reach 10
days
.
To sum up
, we can say the average daily temperatures have a significant distinction between these cities And the average number of
days
with rain does not match various.
Submitted by jqanber4 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words days, canberra, brisbane with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: