The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
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The line graph gives information about tourism to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, a period of 30 years. ,
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the bar graph shows information about the favourite countries visited by UK residents in the year 1999.
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, the percentage of tourists who travel abroad by UK residents was
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increased
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