The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
The table provides information on how many
people
visited abroad in 4 different years
between 1990 to 2005. Data is given for 1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005 and focused areas are, Africa, America, Asia and Correct article usage
the pacific
pacific
, Europe and Change the capitalization
Pacific
Middle
east.
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the Middle
Total
count of Correct article usage
The total
people
increased from 448.9 million in 1990 to 615.2 million in 1995 showing a
rapid growth in a 5-year period of time Correct article usage
apply
while
after that, it shows a slow upward trend. Furthermore
, during the 25 years
of time overseas travels increased gradually in all the regions except in America where the number of people
who went overseas had declined in 2005 compared to 2000.
Moreover
, in all four years
Europeans were responsible for more than half of the total count Add a comma
,years
while
the Middle East was the least contributor in all these years
. The number people
from Asia and Change preposition
of people
Pacific
region who went Correct article usage
the Pacific
abroard
had more than doubled in 2005 which was 135.8 million Correct your spelling
abroad
than
25 Correct quantifier usage
more than
years
earlier.Submitted by vishvaisuranga on
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