The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The table provides information on how many
people
visited abroad in 4 different
years
between 1990 to 2005. Data is given for 1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005 and focused areas are, Africa, America, Asia and Pacific, Europe and the Middle east. The total count of
people
increased from 448.9 million in 1990 to 615.2 million in 1995 showing
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rapid growth in a 5-year period of time
while
after that, it shows a slow upward trend.
Furthermore
, during the 25
years
of time overseas travels increased gradually in all the regions except in America where the number of
people
who went overseas had declined in 2005 compared to 2000.
Moreover
, in all four
years
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Europeans were responsible for more than half of the total count
while
the Middle East was the least contributor in all these
years
. The number of
people
from Asia and the Pacific region who went abroad had more than doubled in 2005 which was 135.8 million more than 25
years
earlier.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
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