The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.
The table provides information on how many rapid growth in a 5-year period of time
people
visited abroad in 4 different years
between 1990 to 2005. Data is given for 1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005 and focused areas are, Africa, America, Asia and Pacific, Europe and the Middle east.
The total count of people
increased from 448.9 million in 1990 to 615.2 million in 1995 showingAdd an article
a
while
after that, it shows a slow upward trend. Furthermore
, during the 25 years
of time overseas travels increased gradually in all the regions except in America where the number of people
who went overseas had declined in 2005 compared to 2000.
Moreover
, in all four years
Europeans were responsible for more than half of the total count Add a comma
,years
while
the Middle East was the least contributor in all these years
. The number of people
from Asia and the Pacific region who went abroad had more than doubled in 2005 which was 135.8 million more than 25 years
earlier.Submitted by vishvaisuranga on
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