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In the past, the role of a teacher was to provide information. Today, students have access to a lot of information. There is, therefore, no role for teacher in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?

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Technological advancements have had profound effects on all aspects of our lives, and education and teaching are no exception.
While
 some feel that by using the internet now
students
 have a lot of
information
 and they love to learn online so they do not need
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teacher
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. In
this
 essay, I will examine
this
 view, though I personally disagree with
this
 statement and feel that even the
students
 have access to a lot of
information
 they still need teachers. Despite the ubiquity of the internet and computers nowadays, every
students
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 has access to all kind of
information
, Teachers still plays an important role,
Above all
,
Students
 do not always learn from
information
 the primary reason to be educated is the environment and
teacher
 are the main source for providing informational environment. with
information
 a scientist can learn the theoretical concept but to making it practical they need a
teacher
.
for instance
, if a doctor learns a book about how to do surgery he might clear all concepts by just reading it but in order to do practical he or definitely needs a surgeon who can teach him or her. Given its continued importance, it is vital in my view to continue teaching by
teacher
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 because with them
students
 can discuss these issues right away and if they have a concern about some topic they do not need to search for that particular topic online.
for example
, A study shows that
students
 who discuss with their gurus on regular basis, only understand the topics they are good communication skills as well. In conclusion, Even though in
this
 digital world knowledge is everywhere, I think,
However
, we still need teachers and an education system.
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