Some people think that changing people’s attitude to other countries and cultures is an important factor in reducing world poverty. Others, however, feel that the most important method is trade. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Poverty

has become a menace for the globe. Everyone has their own perspective on

this

hot issue as on one hand some people believe that it can be tackled by the change of attitude about other ethnicities and on the

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hand it is the popular belief that only

trade

will solve the problem. Let's discuss both our views in the next paragraphs.

Firstly

, it can not be denied that despite the fact that globalisation is at its peak but still there is an uneven distribution of resources and opportunities.

In addition

to

this

, we are unsuccessful to become global citizens as we are still not ready to understand and accept the difference between the cultures of the world. For illustration, many countries in South Africa are not considered fit by many of us to do business with

thus

, omitting investments and

finally

resulting in

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lack of opportunities. Ultimately, it can be said that

poverty

is one of the outcomes of

such

a phenomenon. So, we need to change our attitude towards the culture of other countries to eradicate

this

problem.

Secondly

,

Trade

as an important factor to curb the menace the

poverty

can not be overseen. As it is believed that

trade

can open new ways to exchange the views of two different ethnicities and for new chances to grow and progress . For ,example if the old silk

trade

route is opened between India, Pakistan, China and Afghanistan

then

it might bring tons of solutions to many problems of the area as it will flourish the communities which were not taken care of by respective governments or do not have many resources to progress.

Further

, the

trade

might help develop the educational level of undereducated citizens.

While

taking the context of the above discussion, I inferred that even though

trade

might help get things better and brighter but we need to change our attitude about other countries as they may provide a better opportunity for one to progress and grow and by doing

this

we might help in resolving the issue of

poverty

.