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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

#deforestation #development #species #habitat #point #extinction #animals #measures
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conservation for the balance of
environment
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. The trees
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 down every day , and
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 urban areas ,
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 indigenous area. Personally, I strongly agree
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 each species must
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 by people. On the one hand,
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plants and other species
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participate life of the world.
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 at the manufacture and produce many things like a coat, a
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handbag
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shoes and
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clothes.
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their
lifes
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lives
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 and punishment
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many
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humans doing illegal hunting the sell them ,
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that
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are being widen
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at
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 the areas.
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Azerbaijan countries publish a statistical report and
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 thousand of persons were punished.
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this
 precaution is not enough ,to stop illegal work.
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these are problems
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 gradual growth every year,
by
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of
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solutions.
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, the governments ought to apply heavy
law
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laws
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 and they will be using high quantity punishment of money.
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 these days, there are voluntary companies and those
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organizations
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the
goverment
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government
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this
 issue
such
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' natural
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 environment'. That situation is
helpfull
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helpful
 to the world. In conclusion, I would maintain that
,
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each human
understand
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and pay attention
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the
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animals
 and other species must be
preservation
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by humans. In the meantime, we need learning to the children, they will
be
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take care of desperate creatures.
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