With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

The

Correct article usage

Animals

show examples

animals

are important for the reason they provide

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

conservation for the balance of

environment

Add an article

the environment

show examples

. The trees

cut

Add a missing verb

are cut

show examples

down every day , and

expande

Correct your spelling

expand

expanded

the

Change preposition

in the

show examples

urban areas ,

then

the hunting

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

damaging

for

Change preposition

to

show examples

generation

Correct article usage

the generation

show examples

of

animals

and plants because they are fragile and belong

the

Change preposition

to the

show examples

indigenous area. Personally, I strongly agree

so

Correct word choice

that

show examples

each species must

be protect

Change the verb form

be protected

show examples

by people. On the one hand,

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

Animals

,

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

plants and other species

are

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

participate life of the world.

Moreover

, they are

using

Wrong verb form

used

show examples

at the manufacture and produce many things like a coat, a

handback

Correct your spelling

handbag

,

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

shoes and

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

clothes.

Also

,

that

is

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

situation

impact

Correct subject-verb agreement

impacts

show examples

their

lifes

Correct your spelling

lives

,

although

the companies and the governments have

announcement

Replace the word

announced

show examples

and punishment

but

Remove the conjunction

apply

show examples

many

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

humans doing illegal hunting the sell them ,

Correct word choice

and that

show examples

that

Correct determiner usage

the

show examples

conditions

are being widen

Change the verb form

are being widened

are widening

show examples

at

Change preposition

in

show examples

the areas.

For instance

recently days

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

Azerbaijan countries publish a statistical report and

this

report

shows

Change the verb form

show

show examples

thousand of persons were punished.

Nevertheless

Add a comma

,Nevertheless

show examples

this

precaution is not enough ,to stop illegal work.

On the other hand

Add a comma

,

show examples

these are problems

a

Correct your spelling

of

show examples

gradual growth every year,

by

contrast

Add the comma(s)

,contrast

show examples

there are many

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

solutions.

Firstly

, the governments ought to apply heavy

law

Fix the agreement mistake

laws

show examples

and they will be using high quantity punishment of money.

For example

these days, there are voluntary companies and those

organization

Fix the agreement mistake

organizations

show examples

help

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

goverment

Correct your spelling

government

by

Change preposition

with

show examples

this

issue

such

as

' natural

Correct article usage

the ' natural

show examples

environment'. That situation is

helpfull

Correct your spelling

helpful

to the world. In conclusion, I would maintain that

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

each human

understand

Correct subject-verb agreement

understands

show examples

and pay attention

where

Change preposition

to where

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

animals

and other species must be

preservation

Replace the word

preserved

show examples

by humans. In the meantime, we need learning to the children, they will

be

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

take care of desperate creatures.