Today friendly robots are developed to help people at work and home. Do you think the positive development outweigh the negative?

In today's modern era, friendly technology is becoming increasingly helpful to human beings for completing tedious domestic and professional tasks. I believe the pros of android clearly outclass its cons as work productivity multiplies and time is saved by their usage and

also

helps to enhance profit. To commence with, some people reckon that technology lacks accuracy but I strongly believe that

due to

advancement and refinement in

robots

' working many

such

problems are mitigated.

For example

, in the

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a vacuum cleaner was bought

myself

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but

due to

technological ,inefficiency it was not able to clean properly now I bought a cleaning robot and it is able to detect dusty particles and clean them.

Moreover

, many

such

related problems of machines like slow start or more emission problems are solved.

Furthermore

, few individuals believe that job loss is being caused by

robots

as they replace humans but I think it's merely a myth.

For instance

, nowadays if one is qualified as an engineer

then

there are a lot of career opportunities in robot operations like controlling cranes and forklift machines.

Finally

,

robots

also

act as an aid for humans as through programming they can work themselves by detecting through their sensors like in the case of automated cars. In conclusion, despite some drawbacks like a chance of job loss for not qualified and under-efficient

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androids are most helpful as they safeguard their lives and

also

guide them through their way of daily life. In future, lots of manual work will be replaced by

robots

and there will be

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human

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