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Topic : Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others believe that individuals also can do some things to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In today's society, the environmental problem is getting worse and
people
 are still unsure what they can do to make a positive
impact
 to lessen the climate change effect. It is more interesting since there are some individuals who believe that the government should go hand in hand together solving the problem,
otherwise
 they are unable to make a huge
impact
 by themselves. I totally agree with
this
 opinion and I will elaborate on my reason below.
To begin
 with, the government have the authority to make a system that can make changes in citizens' habits. Innovation in regulation can make how
people
 behave in daily activities.
For example
, there is still a major issue in my city
due to
 the lack of
waste
 segregation in households.
This
 may not become a problem if there is a clear regulation in
waste
 management
such
 as
people
 do not allow to put organic
waste
 in the
waste
 collection in the sideway. Maybe,
initially
, individuals are not used to
this
 unprecedented law and make some mistakes.
However
, as the time comes, they will be accustomed to the new rules. On top of that, the government should provide them with sufficient facilities and access to knowledge. The authorities can conduct a collaboration project with certain public figures and other sectors to promote a massive campaign to save the earth.
This
, in turn, can bring awareness and
impact
 in the long run. Nowadays, social media can be a good booster to help the dissemination of
such
 powerful campaigns, so it will become so much easier for creating
this
 exposure to all
people
.
To sum up
, it is indisputable that
people
 alone can make a big change in facing these environmental problems as it is getting more complex each day. The fastest way is to get every sector's contribution in order to create a huge
impact
 to lessen global warming's effect.
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