IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 3.5

Test and examinations are a central feature of school features in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

It is believed that all over the world students’ knowledge and skills are assessed thanks to examinations which is a key approach for many educational systems. There are relevant pros and cons
of
Change preposition
to
show examples
 the statement.
For instance
Linking Words
, most
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
schools and universities have been using
this
Linking Words
 method for a long time in order to evaluate pupils’ knowledge.At the same time,it will be necessary to point out that
harm
Correct article usage
the harm
show examples
/stress
that is
Linking Words
 caused by all exams makes a great impact on your mental health.
In other words
Linking Words
 constant stress may even lead to certain illnesses. On the one hand,most
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
teachers would agree that testing is
also
Linking Words
 a good way to see the strengths and weaknesses of your students.
That is
Linking Words
 why there are TAs in the classrooms who are supporting lower children.But
on the other hand
Linking Words
,tests do not always show the real knowledge of students.
For instance
Linking Words
, some of the pupils may cheat and copy the work of
his
Correct pronoun usage
their
show examples
 friend,
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
show examples
 happens a lot. My own personal view is that there is merit in both sides of the question but I do agree with the idea that all the stress and effort that you have experienced may be worth it because you can get plenty of opportunities in your future.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »- a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: