The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .
The diagram provides
the
information from 2011 to 2018 about the stores’ closure, Correct article usage
apply
as well as
, their opening in that period of time in one nation.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that throughout time, the graphs fluctuate a lot; moreover
, both of them result as
a lower Change preposition
in
number
compared to the number
in the beginning.
A closer look at the data reveals that started from 2011, the number
of the
shops that Correct article usage
apply
have
closed began with about 6,500 shops; after that, the Unnecessary verb
apply
number
were
not steady and fell dramatically in 2014 until reaching Change the verb form
was
the
lowest point in 2015 with lower than 1000 stores; Change the word
its
however
, it also
increased noticeably to almost 5500 during 2015 to 2016 and became steady after that.
In addition
, in 2011, the number
of opening stores had a significant decrease to 4000 and started to rise between 2012 and 2014; nevertheless
, the graph dropped again to the same number
as the first reduction and increased a little bit during
2015 to 2016; Change preposition
from
nonetheless
, it dropped to the lowest point in late 2017 with 3000 stores.Submitted by nutneera.k on
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