The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live.
The pie chart illustrates the country of birth of
people
residing in Australia
. and the table describes where people
live in a rural area or city area depending on the delivery of these countries.
The most impressive from the board is Australia
is the highest leading country. At the same time, the Netherlands is the least country with birth people
living in and on the other hand
, the majority of people
preferred to live in cities area than in rural areas.
The pie chart shows that almost three-quarters of the total population is born in Australia
, and only 7% were born in the UK. New Zealand, China, and the Netherlands born are between 3% and 1%.
The table shows where the population of Australia
lives. People
born outside of Australia
and New Zealand have the highest percentage of the population moving to cities, about 66% and 60% while
they count the highest percentage of people
living in rural areas among others, 17% and 20% respectively. Chinese reached the highest peak of 99% of them settling in cities.Submitted by hihihahahoho on
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