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Nowadays many people prefer to study or live in foreign countries. While studying and living abroad brings many benefits to individuals, it also has a number of disadvantages. What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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These days
people
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 have the tendency to leave their home
country
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 and settle in a foreign
country
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. Most of the reasons for
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 condition circulate between they want to study or live abroad. There is a debate between the advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign
country
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.
This
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 essay will discuss both sides of the argument and draw a conclusion.
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 with, I would like to start with the advantages of leaving your home
country
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. It is not denied that living abroad forces
people
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 to be more open-minded to new things and become independent. By
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 I mean,
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people
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that people
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 need to be flexible and try to understand
a new cultures
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a new culture
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 that may
quite
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 different from their roots.
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,
people
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 who seek to study abroad may
able
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 to receive
a better study environments
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a better study environment
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, facilities and opportunities. On the other side of the discussion, there are some disadvantages. Living in another
country
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 might not allow us to be exposed to our own culture.
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, we might not be able to understand and perform our culture.
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, some
people
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 who
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 abroad for years might not remember most of their native language.
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, we might not be able to help the development back in our
county
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country
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. In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages of deciding to leave your home
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 and stay abroad for some time.
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 it makes
people
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 more independent and open-minded, it might make
people
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 forget their roots.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

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Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural diversity
  • Language immersion
  • Self-reliance
  • Career advancement
  • Academic excellence
  • Homesickness
  • Culture shock
  • Cost of living
  • Language barrier
  • Visa regulations
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