men and womwen are capable of doing jobs equally well. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

gender equality has now become a quite prevalent trend nowadays. a more firm concept in the industry culture is arising as both men and
women
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is a matter of discord to some extent,
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am discussing some ideas related to its existence. Commencing with the most salient reason why some disagree with it, is the biological structure of a human. people generally argue that
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have
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as compared to
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. those who stick with
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task is suitable for
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. another worth considerable notion is that it is the masculine mentality of society. here people assume that
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while
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can do office
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excellently. people in a general quote that maths is a nightmare for girls which shows their
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biased mentality. despite the given arguments, others including I satisfied with the fact because it is learning which makes a human capacity to do their task. everyone can learn whether it is
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or
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.
man
and woman can perform their jobs if they get equal opportunities. one more reason
besides
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. it can be seen in many companies like food factories or restaurants where
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perform the job of cooking the same as in the army,
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are recruited in the army to serve the country, which was a dream in the past time for girls. in conclusion, men and
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some disagreements
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