The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart given demonstrates the ratio of different kinds of household
waste
that were recycled in one city from 1992 to 2002.
Overall
，five types of waste
recycled
(plastic,cans, paper and glass) all in the biggest amount in 2002.Between 1992 and 2002, the percentages of different types of household Add a missing verb
were recycled
waste
that were recycled all over 10%.
From the figure, we can clearly see that the ratio of the
plastic almost remained stable at about 11% in Correct article usage
apply
these10
years.The proportion of recycled paper in 1997 was almost twice as big as it was in 1997.
It is noticeable that Correct your spelling
these 10
the
every type of household Remove the article
apply
waste
recycled in 2002 was the highest ( from 12% to approximately half a hundred).The ratios of paper and glass in 1992 were in
the same at 14%.In ten years, Change preposition
apply
the
recycled Correct article usage
apply
of
cans had a small decline from 18% to 14%,but it Change preposition
apply
it
climbed to 24% in 2002.Remove the redundancy
apply
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