The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provided illustrates the process of how instant
noodles
are manufactured. Overall
, the process begins with flour mixed with water and oil which during eight stages of manufacturing, it ended up becoming an integral package of instant noodles
.
To be specific, it started with transporting flour from storage silos to the factory, and flour would mix up with water and oil by a mixer which the dough would roll out onto the dough sheet. Next,
the dough was stripped into noodles
discs and boiled. After that, the noodles
would be dry out and sent to the final part.
Finally
, the dried noodles
would be put in cups with vegetables and spices in them, and the cups would be labelled and sealed.Submitted by 4949angela on
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