Many countries in the world find that their cities are overcrowded and need to expand. Is the solution to this to build in existing cities, or build new developments outside?
In the 21st century, lack of public amenities.To illustrate lack of housing, drainage
human
population is increasing Add an article
the human
day-by-day
at the same time Correct your spelling
day by day
cities
are developing. In my view, construction
of new Correct article usage
the construction
cities
generate
Change the verb form
generates
better
life for Add an article
a better
people
.Although
majority
of existing Add an article
the majority
a majority
cities
in the world now facing many problems
. So reconstruction is more challenging. In this
essay, I will explain the positive and negative outcomes of building or refurniting
Correct your spelling
refurbishing
cities
with relevant examples.
To begin
, there are many advantages vested on
rebuilding the current Change preposition
in
cities
Firstly
, it will help to solve money, time and human services.For examples
, building a new Fix the agreement mistake
example
cities
needs more financial support, Fix the agreement mistake
city
work force
and it takes a long time duration.Correct your spelling
workforce
In addition
, it will negatively impact on
existing industries and servicing sectors.Change preposition
apply
Secondly
, while
living in urban areas
and manufacturers become used to live that circumstances
.Change the determiner
that circumstance
those circumstances
Therefore
, shifting them from one area to another is
literally Unnecessary verb
apply
impact
their physical and mental co-existence.Correct subject-verb agreement
impacts
Thirdly
, if the government construct new cities
outside, especially rural
Change preposition
in rural
areas
, it brings more environmental problems
and destruction of the vegetation.Finally
, the construction of new urban areas
give
an opportunity for a better standard of life for Change the verb form
gives
people
who live in remote or under developed
Correct your spelling
underdeveloped
areas
.
On the other hand
, having new cities
help to reduce problems
like transportation and the lack of public transportation andCorrect article usage
the
this
, recently Indian government built a new city outside of the mega city Bombay.In addition
, a recent study shows that 55% of traffic problems
of
Bombay Change preposition
in
solved
and even economically underprivileged citizens get their public health services. Add a missing verb
are solved
Moreover
, majority
of the existing Correct article usage
the majority
cities
are overcrowded because of increasing
population and Correct article usage
the increasing
people
's excessive migration from rural areas
. Consequently
, this
will generateCorrect article usage
a
problems
and crime rates. Therefore
, new cities
provide more space for people
to live and work peacefully. Furthermore
, industries can Change the verb form
be built
built
or expand their services in crowded places especially new Wrong verb form
build
cities
.
In conclusion, there is a saying 'a
coin has two Correct your spelling
a
sides'
Correct your spelling
sides
similarly
building new cities
and rebuilding an existing city bring both positive and negative outcomes. So the local government and authorities need to be careful for
the protection of Change the preposition
with
about
of
environment
and the human life.Add an article
the environment
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