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Many countries in the world find that their cities are overcrowded and need to expand. Is the solution to this to build in existing cities, or build new developments outside?

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In the 21st century,
human
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the human
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 population is increasing
day-by-day
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day by day
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 at the same time
cities
 are developing. In my view,
construction
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the construction
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 of new
cities
generate
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generates
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better
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a better
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 life for
people
.
Although
majority
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the majority
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 of existing
cities
 in the world now facing many
problems
. So reconstruction is more challenging. In
this
 essay, I will explain the positive and negative outcomes of building or
refurniting
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refurbishing
cities
 with relevant examples.
To begin
, there are many advantages vested
on
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 rebuilding the current
cities
Firstly
, it will help to solve money, time and human services.For
examples
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, building a new
cities
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city
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 needs more financial support,
work force
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 and it takes a long time duration.
In addition
, it will negatively impact
on
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existing industries and servicing sectors.
Secondly
,
while
 living in urban
areas
 and manufacturers become used to live
that circumstances
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that circumstance
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.
Therefore
, shifting them from one area to another
is
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literally
impact
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 their physical and mental co-existence.
Thirdly
, if the government construct new
cities
 outside, especially
rural
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in rural
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areas
, it brings more environmental
problems
 and destruction of the vegetation.
Finally
, the construction of new urban
areas
give
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 an opportunity for a better standard of life for
people
 who live in remote or
under developed
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underdeveloped
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areas
.
On the other hand
, having new
cities
 help to reduce
problems
 like transportation and the lack of public transportation and
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lack of public amenities.To illustrate
this
, recently Indian government built a new city outside of the mega city Bombay.
In addition
, a recent study shows that 55% of traffic
problems
of
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 Bombay
solved
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are solved
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 and even economically underprivileged citizens get their public health services.
Moreover
,
majority
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the majority
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 of the existing
cities
 are overcrowded because of
increasing
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the increasing
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 population and
people
's excessive migration from rural
areas
.
Consequently
,
this
 will generate
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lack of housing, drainage
problems
 and crime rates.
Therefore
, new
cities
 provide more space for
people
 to live and work peacefully.
Furthermore
, industries can
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built
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 or expand their services in crowded places especially new
cities
. In conclusion, there is a saying
'a
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a
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 coin has two
sides'
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sides
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similarly
 building new
cities
 and rebuilding an existing city bring both positive and negative outcomes. So the local government and authorities need to be careful
for
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with
about
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 the protection of
environment
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the environment
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 and the human life.
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