Many countries in the world find that their cities are overcrowded and need to expand. Is the solution to this to build in existing cities, or build new developments outside?

In the 21st century,
human
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population is increasing
day-by-day
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at the same time
cities
are developing. In my view,
construction
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the construction
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of new
cities
generate
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better
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a better
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life for
people
.
Although
majority
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the majority
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of existing
cities
in the world now facing many
problems
. So reconstruction is more challenging. In
this
essay, I will explain the positive and negative outcomes of building or
refurniting
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refurbishing
cities
with relevant examples.
To begin
, there are many advantages vested
on
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rebuilding the current
cities
Firstly
, it will help to solve money, time and human services.For
examples
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, building a new
cities
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city
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needs more financial support,
work force
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and it takes a long time duration.
In addition
, it will negatively impact
on
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existing industries and servicing sectors.
Secondly
,
while
living in urban
areas
and manufacturers become used to live
that circumstances
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.
Therefore
, shifting them from one area to another
is
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literally
impact
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their physical and mental co-existence.
Thirdly
, if the government construct new
cities
outside, especially
rural
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in rural
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areas
, it brings more environmental
problems
and destruction of the vegetation.
Finally
, the construction of new urban
areas
give
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an opportunity for a better standard of life for
people
who live in remote or
under developed
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areas
.
On the other hand
, having new
cities
help to reduce
problems
like transportation and the lack of public transportation and
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lack of public amenities.To illustrate
this
, recently Indian government built a new city outside of the mega city Bombay.
In addition
, a recent study shows that 55% of traffic
problems
of
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Bombay
solved
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and even economically underprivileged citizens get their public health services.
Moreover
,
majority
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the majority
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of the existing
cities
are overcrowded because of
increasing
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the increasing
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population and
people
's excessive migration from rural
areas
.
Consequently
,
this
will generate
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lack of housing, drainage
problems
and crime rates.
Therefore
, new
cities
provide more space for
people
to live and work peacefully.
Furthermore
, industries can
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built
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or expand their services in crowded places especially new
cities
. In conclusion, there is a saying
'a
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a
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coin has two
sides'
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sides
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similarly
building new
cities
and rebuilding an existing city bring both positive and negative outcomes. So the local government and authorities need to be careful
for
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the protection of
environment
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the environment
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and the human life.
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