You recently received an invitation to a three day training programe which should be benefit you and the company write a letter to you manager and say:- ask to attend the program, decribe the program, explain how the program will benefit the company. write at least 150 words

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Dear Sir, My name is Shikha, and I am working as a

Java

developer in your team. I am writing

this

letter to you to inform you that I have received an invitation regarding the

JAVA

training programme at our headquarters office in Delhi

this

coming week. I would like you to allow me to attend

this

seminar as it will help me in enhancing my development skills, and ultimately I can work on better projects and deliver good output which will contribute towards the company's growth. In the email, they have written that they will focus more on the practical use of

JAVA

these days and its hacks to fix errors quickly

Also

, you know that I am a senior developer in

this

technology, so I can

also

train other junior developers with my advanced skills in

JAVA

. I hope you understand and allow me to attend it. Looking forward to your positive response. Thank you so much Yours Sincerely, Shikha

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1Word repetition
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0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

162 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You recently received an invitation to a three day training programe which should be benefit you and the company write a letter to you manager and say:- ask to attend the program, decribe the program, explain how the program will benefit the company. write at least 150 words

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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some people think that iNTERNET HAS BROUGHT PEOPLE CLOSER TOGETHER WHILE OTHERS THINK THAT PEOPLE AND COMMUNITIES ARE BECOME MORE ISOLATED. DISCUSS BOTH SIDES AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Better driver education for better driving habits is more effective than heavier punishments for driving offences. To what extent do you agree or disagree.