The table below gives the information about the co2 production released by give countries that produced the most in 2005 and 2006.
the graph compares the information about the co2
production
released by giving five countries that produced the most in 2005 and 2006.
it is clear that
the amounts of co2 production
in china
increased significantly ,and the number
of co2 production
in the US declined rapidly , but the average number
per person produced in the US was the highest.
the figure for co2 production
in china
was 5600 million
tons
in 2005 increased to 6000 million
tons
in 2006 and became the highest among the other four countries. by contrast
, the figure for co2 production
in the US declined from 5900 million
tons
down to 5000.and the number
of co2 production
India increased slightly from 1200 million
tons
to 1300 million
tons
,and the number
of co2 production
in other two countries remained stable was 1699 million
tons
in Russia and 1100 million
tons
in japan .
the average amount per person produced co2 in the Us was 19.8 kg
and the rate of change was -2% the second number
was 9.8 kg
in Japan and the rate of change was 11% ,and the number
in china
was 4.5 kg
and in India was 1.2 kg
the rate of change was 8%.meanwhile , the average number
of per person produced co2 in china
was 4.8 kg
and in Russia was 12 kg
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