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The table below gives the information about the co2 production released by give countries that produced the most in 2005 and 2006.

The table below gives the information about the co2 production released by give countries that produced the most in 2005 and 2006.
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the graph compares the information about the co2
production
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 released by giving five countries that produced the most in 2005 and 2006.
it is clear that
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 the amounts of co2
production
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 in
china
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 increased significantly ,and the
number
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 of co2
production
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 in the US declined rapidly , but the average
number
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 per person produced in the US was the highest. the figure for co2
production
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 in
china
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 was 5600
million
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tons
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 in 2005 increased to 6000
million
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tons
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 in 2006 and became the highest among the other four countries.
by contrast
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, the figure for co2
production
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 in the US declined from 5900
million
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tons
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 down to 5000.and the
number
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 of co2
production
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 India increased slightly from 1200
million
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tons
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 to 1300
million
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tons
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 ,and the
number
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 of co2
production
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 in other two countries remained stable was 1699
million
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tons
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 in Russia and 1100
million
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tons
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 in japan . the average amount per person produced co2 in the Us was 19.8
kg
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 and the rate of change was -2% the second
number
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 was 9.8
kg
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 in Japan and the rate of change was 11% ,and the
number
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 in
china
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 was 4.5
kg
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 and in India was 1.2
kg
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 the rate of change was 8%.meanwhile , the average
number
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 of per person produced co2 in
china
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 was 4.8
kg
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 and in Russia was 12
kg
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 .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words co, production, china, number, million, tons, kg with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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