The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the step of how to recycle
plastic
bottles
.
Overall
, it is a circular process containing a total of nine steps from waste
plastic
bottles
to some basic products. The first step of the circle is dropping the
plastic
bottles
into the recycling bin.
Then
, the rubbish truck will transport all the
plastic
waste to the recycling centre. Following that, there are skilled workers responsible for picking the right sort of
bottles
into the right box. After that, all of the
plastic
bottles
picked are compressed into blocks and
then
crushed into washing. During the next stage, all the washing will be put into a special machine to produce
plastic
pellets.
The next step is
heating pellets to form the raw material which is used to produce products. And
subsequently
, the raw material is packaged and
then
processed to make end products.
Finally
, they will go through the recycling procedure again.
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