The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

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The pie charts illustrate the three categories of

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and Italy in 2000 and will predict the categories' populations in 2050.

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, there are significant changes in

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and Italy;

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, the 15-59

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category ranks first in

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in 2050 and

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in Italy in 2050.

Yemen

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formed 3.6% of the population in 2000 and will see a slight increase of 2.1% in +60

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ranks first in 2000 and the share of it was 50%

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it saw a significant fall and will dive to just 40% in 2050. Just over 46% was allocated to 15-59

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and it will experience a slight growth of 10%. Italy was the biggest population in 15-59

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and responsible for appropriately 60%.

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, it will see a moderate drop and will reach 46.2%.

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, over 60

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comprised just under 25% and it will have a dramatic rise and will reach 42%. The

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category will witness a slight fall of 3% in 2050.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

166 words

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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Topic: Write a opinion paragraph about the benefits of taking online courses

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