The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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The pie charts illustrate the three categories of
Yemen
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and Italy in 2000 and will predict the categories' populations in 2050.
Overall
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, there are significant changes in
Yemen
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and Italy;
however
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, the 15-59
years
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category ranks first in
Yemen
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in 2050 and
also
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in Italy in 2050.
Yemen
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formed 3.6% of the population in 2000 and will see a slight increase of 2.1% in +60
years
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.
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, 0-14
years
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ranks first in 2000 and the share of it was 50%
although
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it saw a significant fall and will dive to just 40% in 2050. Just over 46% was allocated to 15-59
years
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and it will experience a slight growth of 10%. Italy was the biggest population in 15-59
years
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and responsible for appropriately 60%.
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, it will see a moderate drop and will reach 46.2%.
Furthermore
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, over 60
years
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comprised just under 25% and it will have a dramatic rise and will reach 42%. The
last
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category will witness a slight fall of 3% in 2050.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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